Aww.. I love it! beautiful poem! u rock , keep writin ;)
xx

Its got a sad feeling to it...its good, but it made me sad. you write very well sweetheart

That's a really awesome poem, it's really sad but it makes you think <3

That was really good, and really sad...i agree with everyone above...5/5...comment back?!

~ cute but sort of sad good poem~

Hey This Is A Very Good Poem Keep Up The Good Work And Keep Writing
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Amber<3

''Kill me'' she begged ..and love said no.. BEAUTIFUL!!!:)

AWW I ALMOSTED STARTED TO CRY GOSH YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I HAVE READ YOURS AND I LIKE IT NO I LOVE IT KEEP ON WRITING I WILL LOOK FRWARD TO MORE OFF YOUR POEMS

Awsomeness is all i gotta say! =)

comment on my poems to please if you get a chance =)

Your amazing at writing....i wish i could be that good...keep weriting your amazing...X3 becca

That was a good poem i like the way you worded please check mine my favorite is us

Kso Definately Really Good!.. kinda emo'ish but definately good.. i could never write anything like that.

Bueatiful!!!!!!! i love it <3

I THiNK THiS iS A BEAUTiFUL POEM.. iT SHOWS ALOT OF EMOTiON AND FEELiNG. -D

I THiNK THiS iS A BEAUTiFUL POEM.. iT SHOWS ALOT OF EMOTiON AND FEELiNG. -D

This Poem Is SO Powerful... If thats how you really feel I feel truely sad for you. You need to go and get out there, there are are TONNES of other boys for you, you just gotta open ur eyes darlin.

Its so beautiful. i loved it. you're really talented so keep writing :)

Hey, cool poem i loved it

It's a great poem, but I think it would've been better if you hadn't taken the idea from a HIM song... good poem though.

This is so cool!