This girl in your poem reminds me alot of myself. i always feel rejected and like no one loves me and im not excally accepted in my life. I only wish that someone could love me and cherish me like in the movies, but those are fairytales and my story is no where near that. keep your head high and go on strong. You seem like a very nice person and whoever doesnt see that, well thats there loss. 5/5
<3 bree
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Hey , i loved your poem sweetie, keep writing , your amzing, write back

That was an osm poem i relate keep writin you are really good

This poem is SOOOO good i Love it! <3.....Hey, i'd really appreciate it if you'd take a look and comment on a few of my poems.. Your a great writer :)

"By day she's an actress,
She covers her tears.
By night she a dreamer,
She's bleeds out her fears. "
.... hits close to home.....
its a good poem....
short and sweet....
simple yet complicated....
i like it...
xoxox
miss lostXinXlife

Very nice...
were you inspired by the song "And Love Said No"(him)?i love that song!your song remindes me on the chours of theirs...almost the same!

Wow thats good...nice work

Very nice one...and the only one not begging for comment i think

Amazing poem. im so sorry that love is so crappy to you....<3