Very sad but good. The flow was excellent. Good job hun 5/5

Hmmm interesting

Amazing
and beautiful ur a amazing girl never forget it XxXoOoxXx

Thts so sad but gr8.....5/5

God bless u dear

Wow !! i liked the way u discribed da girl !! i mean , it is scary and all , but it won't change da fact dat u r sweet and cute and kind !!!!!! lovely poem and hope u write more !!!
xxxshriyaxxx

Wonderfull beautiful

This poem was wonderful!!The expression was very well written!!!The imagery was good and the flow was fell done.The ryhming went good!!!
All the best
And take care

Hey I like this. Its good.

Nice poem, indeed a tragedy

Again a brilliant poem.

Very tragic. i love it. :)
i love the title. i love the word [unfaithful]
not that long, not that short either,
but it explains the whole story.

5/5

Lovely poem i can sooo relate nice i like the way you use the words and syllables TO CREATE A FLOWING EFFECT wow sozzles about the caps love you MWHA XxX

Woah...another sad yet very well written poem..tc muahhzz..

2 thumbs up