This poem starts out very graphic which i think adds to the emotions in it. i really liked the bit about someone knocking on the door n u having to cover up ur scars because they want to come in, i still shudder when i think of that...

I love this poem. it exacult what had happened to me the other night. please comment on my poems. i look forward in reading your other poems

This is great. it gives me a message 2 be very good at hidding my cuts nd being caught since i jus started. life stinks..
very well written. keep it up.=)

Good poem i think the rythme?