*cries*. This one was a tear-jerker. It brought memories and thoughts to my mind. Thank-you for writing!

Wow this is a powerful poem that seaks to everyone. great work, this poem was very inspiring.5/5

Pretty good. it didnt connect with me like other poems do but it was good none the less

I really liked this piece. The stanzas and the words and everything fit perfectly. Just one little thing,
"flowing from my face"
there could be a better discribing phrase there, something that adds more feeling to the reader like
"And tears streamed down my face"
or
"And mascara(and or)eyeliner ran down my face"
something like that. i think that stanza has more potential then what its been givin right now.
(*I didn't mean for that second suggestion to sound like my poem lol i just like the image of running eyeliner*)

I loved it...I can relate a lot :)

Wow..
amazing write,caught the wrods outta my mouth on paper.
keep it up!
-Lisa