The words were so powerful within this poem, i really enjoyed this one.
it was so real and the imagery was awesome
love Tara-Kay

Wow this was an amzing write, so powerful and pure. simply took my breathe away i must admitt.this was a very creative piece and you wrote it with such great detail, very beautiful.

The day the light laid upon your face, You clutched a beat from my heart.
Held it tightly with your grace, Sheltered it when we were apart.

i loved that opening, it was perfect in my eyes. you chose your words so beautifully. what an amazing talent you have.

Your laughs echoed the skies, engaging my mind with thoughts

and that line i loved the most out of all of them. it reminded me of someone that has left my life long ago, but his laughter is what i always think of to remind me he's still here with me. and that line simply said what i was feeling. thank you for sharing this piece, i loved it. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.