Your whiteness is pure

by emad   Feb 17, 2007


Your whiteness is the most pure… no one can protest
Even stars and galaxy all of them surrender to you

You are the moon of seven islands and whole planet
You were created from angel's material

I said this is a clear lightening from the sky then rain fall
Then I realized that was your cheeks and forehead light

Cover this whiteness with your hair
And let the universe see the sun's ray

Coincidences that bring you are lucky
Lucky person who see you all the time

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  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    You are the moon of seven islands and whole planet
    You were created from angel's material

    Coincidences that bring you are lucky
    Lucky person who see you all the time

    Lovely poem but these lines are really wonderful !!

    5/5
    Have a wonderful life ever !
    Cheers
    Salam o Alekum.
    Biya

  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    You are the moon of seven islands and whole planet
    You were created from angel's material

    Coincidences that bring you are lucky
    Lucky person who see you all the time

    Lovely poem but these lines are really wonderful !!

    5/5
    Have a wonderful life ever !
    Cheers
    Salam o Alekum.
    Biya

  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    I like this poem :) I can see that you prise this person that you are writing about very much!

  • 15 years ago

    by Grace

    This is quite beautiful. a true love poem. i agree with silver j, there were a few gramatical errors but that will improve with time =]. keep up the great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Hi,

    In your writing it's obvious English isn't your "mother tongue" therefore grammar and word format is a little off, but nevertheless it's understandable.
    The subject was a little cliche for me eg "angels" and such, but it was sweet anyway.
    Thanks for your comment (and message) about my poem.
    Take care,
    Silver J.

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