Awwww 3 words...or is it 2...wait..1..2..no its 3...I LOVED IT!! keep it up...write more poems...lol

*~Christina~*

WOW!!! 5/5

It looks more like a paragraph than a poem, maybe you could put it in more of a poem format.

Yes you need to put this poem into paragraphs. if you do this this would be a great and intruiging poem.

your first poem so i have to give you a 5. submit more. ill comment on them.

David

I hope that you don't have to go through this though. Keep on writing!!