Hi
this is a great poem but sad beyond words...even though i hate the idea of death and graves, but this one was terrific...i agree with u, we humans are so cruel, we don't give anything without expecting something in return,,,wat i mean is that if a word or a smile or even our friendhship will make some ones day, and save some one a little grieve and give them something to hold on, t hen why deny them....
after all great job,,,
i haven't seen any new poem for long time and i wish u w ould start writing again, because i miss ur words terribly...

Another one that puts a lump in your throat.

"Tonight my heart is put to death
By
An Arrogant beauty"

those lines were my favs.

great job! 5/5

Ooh. prettypretty. I loved it so much. The words were just great, but I don't think the structure is as good as it could be. It's not as balanced.

Wow. i loved this one!! i really liked this verse,
"Someone tell
that dear person,
when I was alive
She never cared.
Now I'm dead,
Tell her
not to visit my grave.
As
Her tear drops will not change anything".
Perfect.. as always.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

One word. WOW!! make it 2. AMAZING! ok, 3 is a lucky number! Third time's a charm! Anyway... word 3. GASP!!!!

This is sad but beautifully penned. You have a unique and intriguing style of writing. Nice job.

So very well written. I loved the way you've penned it... Wonderful Poem!

I love this poem
unfortunately I can relate

"Tonight my heart is put to death
By
An Arrogant beauty"

Thiss is amazingg..

jealous..??

a little.

I like how at the start you incorporated another poem into this one. using an example, so i as the reader could visulise the real situation. well done.

My luck was
Similar to
The one of
The unluckiest person

great poem all up. you sure have a passion for writing poetry. excellent as usual.

5/5 David

This poem is really moveing. anyone who can relate is just like......ah, my english is failing me right now, but really, that poem was beautiful.
5/5

Wow this is amazing. i enjoyed it a lot. the emotion in it is so deep. the format is kind of unique..but regardless it's a job well done! keep it up =]

I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job.

Great job on the write. I really enjoyed it and could really see where you are coming from. Nice job and keep up the good work. If you could check out some of my work. I really think you would enjoy it. Thank you

Wow, Really Sad But Really Nice. Keep On Working, I Really Enjoy To Read Your Poems.

This poem is such a good poem. It touched me. Keep it up.