Wow.. thats really sad..
did u really lose your mom?
im so sorry to hear that,.
but i really like how you expresed yourself.. i truely felt the pain that you are bringin in the poem

5/5 :D

Very nice poem.

very emotional just like how i like them.

Thiis is very sad... It reminded me of my grandma i almost cried keep writing im looking forward to reading them...