Wow. This is really deep. Good job, again, Isabelle! This is definatly a unique and wonderful poem!

That was a very interesting style. I did however liked it. I loved your use of words. I'm sorry I don't have time to make a good comment, but I have to go. You did a good job writing it though.

Just to cry with the earth,
we cry together!
^^I really enjoyed that part!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Woah. I really liked that poem and it really put into words how you feel. Great job Isabelle!!

Excellent poem. The imagery is so profound. Keep up the good work! 5/5