Another excellent poem! Ireally love the way you make these stories and messages. This is really wonderful. I look forward to reading more of your work!

Nice job. I like the mystery in this. Good rhythm and rhyme.

That was so beatiful
and happens in everday life
thats why you are one of my fav's ;)

That was a great poem.
Nice job.

Very good.The rhythm was really great. keep up the good work 5/5

DUDE how the hell do u come up with this haha bro this is 5/5 man i would give it 100 man i loved it man. damn u going down on my favorite haha crazy poem dude

WoW! This poem is amazing! I really felt something while reading it. I wish I could write as beautifully as you do!