Very sad but beautiful poem!

This poem is so well written. I really enjoyed reading it, specially because I've been alone, and I've felt like that. Like I don't want to be alone because some of my thoughts are scary and desperate.

Good job! =) 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

"The quite really pains me
When nothing is what I hear
Needing the sound of your voice
Being alone my biggest fear"

the fear of being alone will do that to you...its a terrible feeling i know all too well..that stanza blows it away..i love it...just the sound of a voice can make everything ok..its so true..amazing work ..wow

"Loneliness seeps into my heart
Tears running down my face
Needing someone with me tonight
Comfort of knowing I am safe"

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"Being alone my biggest fear"..

^^it reminds me of my childhood when I was afraid to be alone at night... now I am afraid of being Alone... so much emotion is filled in those lines..

"Trying to get through the night
Just knowing nobody is there
Waiting on the sun to rise
I hate feeling this despair"

^^beautiful composition....

excellent work..

Cindy,

As well written as the poem is, it left a rather unpleasant lump in my throat, so thank you very much for that!
Loneliness is a horrible thing but sometimes those who suffer don't realise that there are still an awful lot of people who love them and are there for them....
Take care Cindy and stay well,
Ben