Comments : Lies of Tomorrow

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    WOW! I get so lost in your poetry... This is amazing, really wish I couldn't relate to such a piece. You conveyed these feelings just perfectly in your own awesome style...

  • 17 years ago

    by Void

    "^ I presume repeating the above statements is unnecessary"
    (and yet I've done it anyway)
    I'm just another reader to come and tip my hat to you. In all honesty, it blew me away to read something like that. With the title as it was, I wasn't expecting much of it to be metaphorical, or sensual...I love that you proved me wrong. Excellent job.
    I'm taking alot out of just reading this, and I hope I can come back around and be taught more. :). You're a born writer.

  • Interesting...4/5