Very nice poem i loved it u really should get more up on here or at least show. and talk 2 me but yeah i guess u never do that hmmm well im going to miss u when u leave long time! haha wheres my hug!!! want my hugy... oh yeah ken really likes u haha i told u from the start!
p.s. me 2!!!! muhahahaha oh well cya well u told me to comment and i did miss that cute smile of yours! and that grumpyness of yours haha and how u always make colin mad haha now i have 2 do that all by myself waaah cya!

I luv it, i can relate to this poem heaps, i luv the emotion which is truely deep and the way it just seemed to keep on flowing, nice work :)

5/5

Wow...
dat wuz great
i loved it
it showed alot of emotions :]
i can relate big time
5/5
keep writing