It was really good. I almost started crying when I read it.

Hey I wrote a poem almost just like that last year! Where did you get that from?

Awww that makes me want to cry
i never see why anyone would want to hurt someone so innocent :'(
**SaRa**

That was written very well! I hate the way people do that to just little kids!!

Ok, yeah i voted for it, but how is that out of pity? it's not like it's going to help stop or prevent child abuse.

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

Wow i think i was crying that was great
5/5 love linda

I found my self with my jaw on the floor... Well hanging open! This part made me and my family (mom and step dad) tear up...

It must have been bad
To go through so much harm
But at least she died
With her best friend in her arms

This was ad i almost cried

Oh my gosh! I cried. I ain't gonna lie. I cried. The part that made me fall apart was "that she loved her parents but they wanted her to die" and "At least she died with her best friend in her arms."So sad...So sad
If you get a chance check out my poems and quotes
keani loves koa

This poem made me cry.. i love children.. and to hear a storylike that is painful.. i have seen child abuse happen before.. i was so scared.. i dont no why it happens but i hope it ends real soon

xoxox
SkY3

What you say about the child abuse going around is true... and unfortunate
sadly enough not much is being done to prevent these crimes
btw this poem was quite powerful

I love your poems, you have quite a talent. i have also read your blogs and i must say i definitely agree with everythinh you have said. it was like i was reading my ow thoughts, but you just have a better way of putting it. peace