Great poem david! i love ur poems to death but this is my favorite! well written!

Well written great job keep it up!!!

Great poem...it was really good and wonderfullly done!! keep up the good work....5/5

Well written mate, i can understand totally where ur coming from.
Keep it up
-Black night-

Huzzah! That's what it's all about.

"i may seem overbearing, even a little fierce
but it is the hearts of wrongdoers i wish to pierce"

^^I loved those lines right there. They held so much power and depth.

"know your history, if we do not remember it we will repeat it
but if you believe in something, fight for your say, don't quit"

^^My favourite part of the whole piece, I found those two lines to be amazing, filled with so much meaning and written so beautifully.

I thought the flow seemed a little shaky in some places, but the message behind this piece certainly made up for that.

I was thrown of by the fact that your I's were uncaptalized, but that's a minor detail, just me being picky.

On the whole...I love this.