Very very very good..but please don't die!
xxx

Great, I really like the last part. 5/5 ;D

~Alicia

Wow this was really good it's sad you feel this way because this was such a great poem it was wonderful your so talented

Wow very nice poem. love the ending... 5/5

Wow....deep

Xcellent poem, I like how you bring the reader emotion out. Sad but absolutely good..XP

Wow..this is an amazing poem. Your really talented. Keep it up. 5/5

Jadee.:)

0MG i REALLY LiKE THiS 0NE iT ALM0ST DESCRiBE ME A LiL BiT.......
W0W THiS iS G00D
Y0U WRiTE VERY WELL
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-MiCHELLE
{5/5}
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