Awwwww this is the cutest little poem ever... I know how it feels to watch someone you love to be wit someone else..anywayz 5/5 girl..
thanx 4 the comment...you better comment back... o ya 5/5 and I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Nice one :-)

Thats really sweet!!! thx 4 the comment u left me!! u have real tallent. my bf broke up wit me n it hurts every time i see his wit his new girl.. did this really happen 2 u???

Thanx f0r the comment but i cant read that poem that u want me to read so put it in the feautered section... lol well later dudeeeeeeeeeeee hahahahah

Aww. the whole poem is sweet, but i think you could fix the structure a bit.

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Omg this is wonderful, i can relate 2 many of ur poems in a way or so. i've added u 2 my favorites cuz u write very nice poems and i enjoy reading them. =) this is great. keep it up. 5/5

Wow dat must of been harsh. u got really good poems!!! xoxo maddie

This poem made me cry

Im guessing your out of highschool then or your a senior or jr?
cuz ur age says 17.
Ahh well thats good u get to see him alot.
My boy is really involved in sports so we have to work hard to find time to see eachother but man the longer the wait the better it is when we hangout.
This saturday hes all mine from 845 to 130am im excited :]

Yeah their are plenty of girls and im just like fckk you haha :]

Aww thats kool you have classes with him.
My boy goes to this thing hafl the day for culinary school (he can cook can you say bonus??) haha.
Im a freshman and my boy is JR.
Hes only 2 1/2 years older then me so it doesnt bother me and he seems fine with it.
Agh i cant wait tell saturday
somethings deffinitily going down...;]

Hey gurl

omgsh i can relate to this poem sooo much i mean i love this guy justin right we went out for like a while and then he dumps me and i juss miss him soo but im lettin him go well yea im returnin ur fav!!! lol ttyl if you have yahoo add me princess_punk_1020 or aim sportyLC101 kk love yaz

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It's ook you commented late.. i play sports too. i play softball.,.. wut else do u play????

Lovely. i like this one a lot too. i deff no what it feels like to watch the one person you love/ed be with someone else. it's hard but you move on and realize there's other people who care.

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O ya by the way i am 17 lol

That is sooo true! i love it! that has to be one of the best poems that i've read lately!

xoxo kisses

I love it! It's the best one you've wrote so far! :)

Omgosh. this reminds me of something that happend with me. I love it! 5/5

Hi sara.... wats up??? how was ur day??? sorry but i wasnt on at that time but i am probably gonna be on today...comment bac

Yeah! Yeah..still feel this way and just do not care anymore and just want her to be happy, opposite for me, but says what I think. Good stuff.

Might as well comment on this good poem again. Yeah I forgot to mention about school that I could proabably pass for a junior, becaues I am 6' but skinny as heck.