Thw beginning was truly awesome.. the sphere and everything was there, only too bad it ended a little more into a good end than it first looked like, but still very good.

Death can sometimes be beautiful but never forced. Life will always rise above death, no matter what. Very well written, only that the end there might be a few mistakes. spelling. I did like it a lot anyway. Reminds me of a nirvana song.

This was a great poem...really dark...and the way you described everything made me feel like I was in it, too...thats awesome...keep em cumin! :)