Now I shall Die

by ImmortalKitty   Feb 22, 2007


Love you ripped my heart to shreds
You lead me on and let me fall
Into a pit of jagged stakes
That pieced through to my very soul
The pain in my heart could not be compared
To any pain that can ever be felt
In the body of a war hero
You were the force that kept ma alive
And now without you I shall die
Death cannot compare, it is my salvation
Because life is not fare, nore is my love
For I have loved, and now I shall die
Know this before I go, it was you I loved
But you rejected me
So now I shall die

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  • 15 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    Another great poem. =]
    thats all i can say really,.. sry im not more of a critique. =P but still, keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Aghh that was tragically graphic....that was good.
    Though i found the sudden final line a tad melodramatic.