I am so glad to be the first one to read it. This one is surely the best one i have read so far as it holds a message in which i so very much believe.
But somehow when i read some of the comments made by people here on this site it really hurts. I wont talk abt other sites or places as i always respected this site coz i respect Poetry....but somehow things seems to be changing here too.

Glad that you highlighted this issue & now i hope this one goes on top and more people read it & LEARN.

all the best and take care

Yep the world sure would be cindy, but some people just dont care. this is another good poem, love the flow, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

Good point Cindy....some people just don't have a clue....or just don't care! We should all think before we speak....or...."write"....
Debbie

A beautifull written message that everyone should read and take note of.I know only too well that words can hurt so much.

Great poem with a great message. So often we say things we don't really mean and we don't realize it until someone says it to you.

Aww thats very good and very true, sometimes what people say can hurt more that anything. Great poem! And thank you very much for commenting on mine.

I really like this, so far from what I've seen we share some of the same feelings about society. Keep writing.

A great poem with a real meaning. This is true, people should really think about what they say.
good job
love Tara-Kay

I love this poem! it is all true. very good work!

It held a great deal of truth and wouldn't be great if we were all capable of following that advice. Sometimes it's hard to think before speaking, which is why many argue and settle into extensive quarrels.

I though that your poem was very true and had a lot of emotion.:)...I really like your work...keep up the good job

This is so true and so beautifully written. its so sad and hurtful when people don't think before they speak...and so many people dont realise the pain their words can cause. i think everyone can learn from this poem...including me. well done =)

Just as a kind word can make someone's day, an unkind one can break it. People should think about what they say or type before doing so. Each is entitled to their own opinion and interpretation but when yours puts another down I have to say what my mom taught me:

If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all!!!!!!

Sometimes the most beautiful poems come straight form the heart and do not have to have perfect rhythm, rhyme. They also do not require others to use a dictionary to interpret. Sometimes simple is enough!!

An amizing piece of write! I love it...

Aww this is a goos poem x x x x i like it very much x x