I loved this poem, i dont know what it was but something about this bit took my breath away:

My thirsty and tired voice

i think it might have been how realistic this was, it was amazing, well done

This write is very painful to read.
Living without the one we love
is so painful. This poem is crying
with such pain. You have done a wonderful job putting this into words.
Take care. Your friend Cindy

This is great it feels like it really is a pice of you

and the line {"That Now time is come to welcome
The angels of death"} is great i love it

Ohh my God ths poems i dont have any words o say its painfull!!
5/5

God bless u

After today everything
will be fine because today
I am giving back my life
to God.
^I don"t like this stanza but rest of this poem is great. It is unique and very deferent from your other poems. Topic is very interesting and you wrote this piece excellently. 5/5

Excellent Job....

This poem is full sad and pain.. Love sucked all the joy your life away and made you miserable.. So sad..

This poem is very unique and beautiful and I would recomment this poem for reading anyone who got a broken heart.

This poem is full sad and pain.. Love sucked all the joy your life away and made you miserable.. So sad..

This poem is very unique and beautiful and I would recomment this poem for reading anyone who got a broken heart.