OK , that was a little spooky! good though.

Ben
This poem is great. The imaginary is wonderful. You need to write a book.

So when your sad and lonely.
And searching for a friend.
In me you've found evil.
In me you've found your end.

Take Care Cindy

This has amazing imagery and a very good rhyme and rhythm to it......very dark though. You do this style well.

Very well written.
i love the words you chose.
-deadbeatromance

Ohhh very dark and thought provoking. I love the ending. What a bite! Good job!

Excellent dark poem, you must be proud to call it 'dark'. The last lines just blew me away, they really did...good job.

Wow, very nice, very nice rhimeing, the ending was by far the best part, great poem, 5/5

Its ok.........

The words you chose are great...there is a poem i wrote called "Contents of a Black Rose" i think you'll like that one...Poems usually have to have a story behind it all...great job 5/5

Wow! I was happy to see this make the boards.

I write in the darkness.
The ambassador of pain.
These atrocities and diseases.
They're my middle name.

You write so well. The way you can write about anything is a amazing talent to have...Take Care Cindy

I can honestly say that this is one of the best poems I have read in the last month. I loved the way that it flowed and the rhyme scheme was simple, but awesome at the same time. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Needless to say this is an amazing poem. The only suggestion i have is that in the third stanza you meant to use "you're" instead of your. Other than that brilliant poem.

Loving it, i wish i was that good!

Sounds like a werewolf story. Great poem, 5 across the board.