Comments : Time Without You [Acrostic ]

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    This poem is gr8... in brief words you have explained alot of things. tht wat i like in poems. and the feelings and emotions whihc u have done gr8fully. gd wrk. take care now i have added you in my favourites.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Yes, this was a great poem. I like acrostics. I used to write them for the one I love just to see if he figured out the hidden message.
    Excellent.

  • Great poem. The word choice was excellent. Good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow this was a deep and well written touching poem...congrats on a great write..nuff luv xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Oh, perfect! That was wonderful, a good and rhythmic acrostic poem is hard to off, especially with rhyme as well!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Lovely poem. It has a great flow and wonderful word choice. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by East Poetry

    TIME WITH OUT YOU.... I really like how it spells that out. My favorite stanza is the first one.

    I think you miss spelled truth in the middle stanza.