Comments : A world betrayed

  • 13 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Very well written. The flow and rhythmn of the poem was excellent as was the message.


  • 13 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great work, this poem was very well written

    Nice job

  • 13 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    A very powerful piece. Well written/worded, nice flow and rhyme scheme. There is a sobering message here for us all.
    Peace, Love, Poetry & Power,
    Gary Jurechka

  • 13 years ago

    by Julie

    Wow..... very well written! great work :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A very interesting read.. quite deep and powerful.. emotion that you feel are very well expressed.

    "We've lost the path that leads to
    the end where mankind wins."

    Sadly.. very true indeed we have my friend.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Shouldn't this:

    ^The prize^
    read "the price"?

    The flow and imagery in this piece are great. Once again a very thought provoking and powerful write. Great job!