I love it!! it's nice to see that a love poem can bring in god. that you can love a man and a god forever and that they can coexist. amazing! <3

I loved the poem and the message..here is my critique:
I think you should change
"It so much powerful when we met
With u and God I am complete"
to
"It was so powerful when we met
With you and God I am complete"
It flows a little better in my opinion :)
great poem tho, i gave it 5/5
~kayli

Beautiful poem!! It sounds like a younger me i used to write like this lol If u wanna read some of my old poems there kinda like this... Good Job i tell u love this guy alot ;) 5/5