Aww.. this isnt dumb.. its cute.. heartfelt.. nice job! :D

Awww great job 5/5 keep it up.

Awh im really sorry about your dad=[

Really nice...wow i think your dad would be proud of you if he saw that...it's nice, and i bet many people feel the same way, if it's their dad or mayb an ex bf

This poem was excellent. i loved it. beautiful!

5/5 David

I like this very much, im sorry to hear about your dad, and this shouldn't be stupid for anyone though this is very great and again i'm sorry again, i hope everything is going well even though you do miss him which will never change. I'm here if you need to talk love.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. also thank you for the comments and sorry it took me long to comment back.

This isn't dumb at all sweetie, it's filled with emotion, pain and longing, anyone with brains can see that.
The repetition worked nicely in thus, you did a wonderful job.

This isn't dumb at all, it is very emotional and very hard to think about, all the pain you must of gone through, great write keep it up i enjoy readin your stuff

Listen there is no need to explain yourself when u write something.
This was pretty good but I would like it if u removed that coment about it beeing dumb.
Poetry is a great tribute so never hesitate... =)

Awww..its not dumb i liked it..very good poem =) but i just sorta think its too much i miss...lol but thts just me

I loved the repition that you have used take care good work 5/5