Amazing.

That's all I have to say. Amazing, incredible, unbelieveable, heart-breaking, emotional.

It is amazing, holds so many ideas to wonder about. Makes my mind whirl with thoughts, great job. Best poem I have read all month.

Alissa

Ok it was good but there are some things u need some help with i didnt really understand the flow to much and it kinda took me to a different track 3/5

"Is it even love that is being spoken of?
Maybe it isn't
Maybe it's simply a different specimen
One that is haunting and drives the sanest of men to madness"
i have to say that this is my favorite part, and i think your writing is really good, like i mean you really get the point in to the poem, but i do think you need to work on the flow alot, so that it will be easier to read.
luv gabriella

Great job. Really makes you think about thigs.
Take care Cindy

I agree with cindy it does make yo u think about things! and this poem was really gooD! 5/5