Very very good I love the meaning, you write really well, I think its really sweet what you wrote on the bottem im sure he would apperciate the poem.
5/5 keep writing,
Always <3,
**SaRa**

This is a brilliant poem, riddled with emotion. He truly is a great hero. Keep up the writing.
5/5
-Black night-

Very well written and what a blessing you must be to your grandpa i bet he is so proud of you..

Your relationship with your grandfather sounds wonderful. You speak highly of him and I can see your respect and love. Wonderful Poem
*Amber*

Wow this poem is sad yet it makes you feel good. So many great people go unrecognized, but not this man. You put alot of emotion into this poem and you can feel that as you read it. Great job. 5/5

lots of love
-Becky

5/5 that is an excellent poem. absolutly wonderful. I couldnt stop reading after the 1st two lines. =] it reminds me of.. nvm =[

its wonderful... im sorry about your great grandpa. Its better to remember the great and not the pain. Its a really good poem.

Sweet! good job davey and go davey's granpa.