Comments : Pride!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    Hey

    I guess this is how we all feel. whether we are male or not.
    This is a great poem. Keep up the great work. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is really well written, and it is good to see that you are standing up for yourself and not letting these people push you down. I can relate to it in my own way. Keep up the great work. =] 5/5

    Tammie xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I loved this poem it showed great power and alot of strong man like emotion lol if thats even possible nice write 5/5 form me because it was fan-tab-ulous

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    WoW ur poem was great i like how u wrote this poem, lotz of emotion 2 it, i give u a 5/5, n i did vote,lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Biaytbo

    WOW! this is an amazing piece. I love it. I love the way you use your words. very powerful in so many ways.

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    I love this one! I love all your poems, I will comment more wen I have a little more time, thank you so much for commenting on my poems as well, it means a lot knowing what people think! keep writing
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    I really lovd it! i wish everyone were as proud of themselves as you, i hope you keep commenting on my poemz, it really means alot to me!
    luv gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredy

    Wow, such a great poem and the message that it delivers is just great. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Hey
    Fantastic poem.
    It's very suportive for people who are down, I think.
    It gives me a good feeling to read it.
    Very good love it!
    keep it up
    Hebe

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Very well written poem! it flowed nicely. i really like what you said in it! brilliant! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Melinda

    Nice poem and thanks for the comment on mine

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    It's good to know you are standing up for yourself. It's a very positive thing. It flowed nicely and was enjoyable to read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Ah yes! confidence and defiance radiates though the entire poem. Love it! Love empowering poems and this is one! good job. peace

  • 17 years ago

    by blue eyes

    This poem has so much more than the average person would see if they read it. It is full of hope and strength, you may forgive people for what they do but some will never change.. Everyone feels that way in one way or another. It's great...

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Very powerful! I really liked this one too! I love all of your poetry. Once again, a great poem, keep up writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by lilali

    Hey love the poem

  • 17 years ago

    by kiara

    Im BAK!!!! lol

    this was great the flow the meaning just everything. it seems your getting way better than when you first started out :) snaps 4 you

    and guess what i finally beated my writers block coz i just posted a new poem so yay me lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very powerful message here. Full of emotion. Forgive me for not r/r/c on any of your work sooner but I thought you were another David who also r/r/c my work. Thank you for your wonderful comments on my poetry. I am glad you enjoyed them as I am enjoying yours. I look forward to reading the rest when I wake up as I work night shift and must go to sleep now........

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Pride can be a dangerouse thing; however, when used properly it can be the saving grace for someone. Always stand firm in your beliefs, but in return do not judge those who believe different then you. Instead respect them for standing true to themselves as well.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Sweet!
    you have pride! i knew you did lol
    this is freaken me out how your so poetic and all, i always guessed there was more than the top layer