Show me the way to my angel
Right to her heart, fly me away
Shatter my desires if thats what you want
Take my dreams but let my hope stay

Wow this had a lot of emotion.
Great poem.

Cant stand and wonder any longer
So i scream at my shadow once again

awwwwwwwww. what a gr8 poem.. wonderfull work. my friend that was the such a gr8 poem i have read today. i also am suffering in this condition.. i also dnt know the way of my road whihc will make me go in her heart. my friend.. you made me happyy after reading this poem and one tear flow from my heart. anyways very gd wrk

You have out done yourself on this one. This is such a gut wrenching poem. It tore my heart out to read this. The raw emotion was amazing.

Standing at the middle of road
Looking for a way to your home
Under this bright shining moonlight
My reflection seems to be so alone

This really got to me your start was wonderful. The ending even better.
Always here for you Dost.
Your friend Cindy

This was just an amazing write. So full of emotion. I wish I could have written something like this. ;P I honestly don't know what to say. You always amaze me with your writings. I loved it! Never stop writing! Love always,

-` Liz

Awesome write. very beautiful. best of wishes

Lovely, thats really beautiful

Sad yet beautiful and heartfelt ,amazing write.Reading your poems is always a treat to your readers.

"Show me the way to my angel
Right to her heart, fly me away
Shatter my desires if thats what you want
Take my dreams but let my hope stay "

That last stanza was just... amazing
It took my breath away.. it really did.
Amazing poem
5/5
*Gem*

Shatter my desires if thats what you want
Take my dreams but let my hope stay "

Brilliant lines Nitin. A marvelous piece. You painted such a clear picture through your pen. Its simply breathtaking. Keep them coming dear.

Best Wishes Always

This was really deep alot of emotion in this poem. xx

Really great write expressed with depth and emotion. A few lines were particularly heartwrenching. The ending was awesome!

Show me the way to my angel
Right to her heart, fly me away
Shatter my desires if thats what you want
Take my dreams but let my hope stay

Wonderful words from you once again. Take care. Debbie

5/5. Amazing work!! Suich a great poem.

This is such a powerful poem, very well written. I enjoyed this write immensley.

~dandy~

Soooo deep.. wow..
it's beautifully written.. you really do justice to emotions.. i loved it..
5.5

Much love,
Ipsita

P.S.
yaar.. kabhi toh email kar diya karo..

Oh this poem was very entruiging to read. i loved the way you put it together. the way it all melded together. perfect!

5/5 David

Hey dear!

thats too touching! u still have that magic. gr8. keep writing.

luv

5/5 really liked this poem ur real talented!

An absolutely amazing write.

"Show me the way to my angel
Right to her heart, fly me away"

These words "captured me". With eyes closed, I repeat ... and am taken to where my heart wants to go!