This is a very good poem goran, its more like an ode to the girl you love, its a perfect 5/5!!! keep writing!!!!

Awww so beautiful!! i loved it like always!! 5/5 of course

This is so sweet. I really enjoyed reading this one. I do have a suggestion though, try shortening a few of the longer lines[take out the,that,it,etc] I think it would have a better flow to it then. Overall I think it was a good write. 5/5

marcella

Nice. Having the dress included in the poem made it a very interesting and different poem all together.
I thought it was sweet overall, and you told the "story" as such, well. Furthermore, it read fluently.
Just a couple of things...
"Angel" "heart" and "singing roses"
gave cliche images, and as you know, I'm against them lol.

Also the line "her view was the purest art" was unclear. Did you mean she looked like the purest art? Or the view she could see, was the purest art? The wording came across forced on that line I'm afraid.
Ok...thanks for sharing

Hello
as simple as this poem was, yet it was sweet and innocent like ur singing rose and your heart.lool
i truly loved it and i wasn't expecting anything great like this.......
great job........wish to see u always merry and happy.....i hate it most when i see that sad tone in your poems
god bless M.F.

I liked it a lot...Good job!

5/5

Very sweet....nice imagery...

I told her
That I will not break that chain of value,
But I will unlock it.
The most beauty in this world,
Yet that simplest girl is unaware of it.

Really like these lines.....good job! 5/5

Good work

I don't know about using the word simplest, try simple. My favorite stanza is:
Her gaze was
A message from her heart.
With that Kurdish dress,
Her view was the purest art.

It's just so pretty.

Very good poem, the style was a little eclectic and sometimes I believe it detracted from the poem, but either way it was written very well and about a very unique topic. Great job, 5/5

~jas~

Very beautifully written, and seen from in your eyes. Your style is different in this poem and gives it a different rhythm, and I like it. It's personal to you, and that's what gives it a nice edge instead of the usual cliché message. Nicely done.

Finally i get to write a comment love love love love love this poem Goran. Dast xosh.^_^

I like this poem man. the last stanza is waht i think put it together. another great write. (:

tom

Heey .. here i am writting u once more:)
didnt knew that u also were kurdish cause soo am I

Aww this is so sweet ... I luv this poem wallah ...

Aww this is so sweet ... I luv this poem wallah ...

Aww this is so sweet ... I luv this poem wallah ...

Aww this is so sweet ... I luv this poem wallah ...

Aww this is so sweet ... I luv this poem wallah ...