Wonderful poem...words r very powerful...

Good work hun.

Thanks for the comment, Idk what im thinking, ive actually tried it before, but im ok. i just remember it when i get sad, and i guess thats what i end up doing, writing, but back to yours. this girl sounds beautiful, youre really good at writing 5/5

Wow..that is deep.You write very very good.man u must luv her.lol.well keep writing..u have a talent,

Awww...very sweet poem...:)

Nice! I like to read about stuff like this; keep it up loverboy.

Great poem u have a interesting way of wording stuff keep up the good work and thanks for the comment on "River of teardrops"

Very Cute..Anyone's lucky to have you.
Great job