Wow that is so sweet ^_^

Let me write down on paper
Words that say much more
Let this remind you later
Of what I was fighting for

i love this verse!!! this poem rocks hun. not "strange" at all

much love and many kisses,
bex

I loved it SOOOOOOOO much

Love Jess

I love this one. the rhyming is perfect & it goes right with the flow of the poem & the wording

Well first of all... it aint weird at all...
the flow was really good... and it had a secret mening in the poem...
keep it up!