Oh scott, this is the most beautifull poem,i could feel every word go thru my body as i read it.
and yes it is true that even a perfect strangers can see... ~beck ~

Hi Dad
Shame about the chat room, I havn't spent so much time on the net which is a good thing I think. Im going to see if exercise is a way of avoiding the medication I feel very edgy at the moment. Being away from Helen helps too. Love you both to bits but Helen and Yrene really did my heads in. Your poem brings a tear, I don't believe in god but I'll say a prey for you anyhow.

Take Care Elisha

Its a beautiful poem i hope things get better really soon. hidden meaning not so hidden i dont think5/5 keep writing

It's beautiful...
thank you for your comment on mine... it's sad... my father totally ignores me unless it involves conflict and you are actually trying... uuhhh...
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Wow...amazing.

Great work 5/5