Firstly would like to thank you for making me a part of this. The experience of working with you is just so magical.
I loved the theme and knowing how much this means to you..made me feel spl. Its really an honour for me to work with you. Thanks a ton for everything.

And yes...Love Never Dies.

all the best and take care

This is a very good poem cindy, love collaboration poems, you and eternity did awsome, perfect flow, another 5/5!!! keep writing!!!

This was ...beautiful.
Original and unique, and the wording and imagery were breathtaking.
You guys did a wonderful job on this.

Cindy this is so beautiful You and End of Eternity did an awesome job....great transition between the two of you. My favorite verse of yours:

When your heart stopped,so did I
How I miss the touch of your hands
Feelings of being held in your arms
Living without you I can't stand

And remember....nothing is lost.....Love forever, Debbie

This is a remarkable poem. Superbly written. Both of you did an excellent colaboration. Each and every single stanza stands out. Keep it up.

Beautifully penned collab. Very heartfelt. EXCELLENT JOB you two!!

As i just said to EOE this is a lovely poem with beautiful words and dedication, we all feel your pain and send our love to you just as he is sending his love to you each and every day xox sam

Your heartbeats are breaths i take
Your tears just pass my lips by
Touch your heart to feel my love
Flow with destiny, never ask why?
___

^ I love the way this ended. This poem was amazing. It reminded me of my friend who passed, and his girlfriend...and a lot of other things, too. ;P I really brought tears to my eyes. You guys did an excellent job. 5/5!

-` Liz

Cindy and End of Eternity - wow - that poem was so beautiful that I sat at my work desk with tears in my eyes. I guess maybe its because the biggest fear I face in my life is loosing my husband at some stage in our lives and me wishing to be with him. It was so beautifully written that, although I still have fear, I hope that when death does separate us temporarily we can still talk like this to each other and know the other one is there for us still. Many thanks for the read. Moira

This was incredibly amazing. True love never dies - i agree with that.

You guys did an outstanding job on this poem.
Excellent.

We'll always miss him until we see him again. stay strong. he'll be waiting. 5/5 very touching

Wow, awsome poem! Loved it...

This was really great, really really great.

Great poem!

Wow this is an amazing poem! i think you did a wonderful job writing it! keep it up! it flowed really nicely! 5/5

~Kristina

Beautiful poem. Very heartfelt. Keep up the great work.

Two of my fave poets wrote a collab!
Yay, i feel all cheerful now.
And such a gorgeous yet bittersweet poem..
I wish i knew what to say but i fear my words will be rambled..
So i'll leave with..
Excellent piece sweets with a truckload of love
5/5
*Gem*

Cindy I don't know you but to be honest most your poems I have read as of right now have been truely amazing. Your writting I would consider my "taste" cause no other writter as of right now can write such a long poem and keep my attention and intrest. Good job and please keep writting =) I would love to hear more from you. -chris

I feel this say all about you and John
You still have something very special
that you share......You have an inner beauty that radiates love of a Pure different kind.....the collab is brilliance...stunnning
Love is pure and will always will be
Cindy this is beautiful and leaves me welled up inside..simply beautiful
I would vote this as a masterpiece of writing....and a song of pure love.

Wow thast so beautifully put together. its so touching with all the emotion and confusion in it. i think its very very good. xxxxxx take kare xxxxxxxx