Thats soo good!
keep it up!

Nice smooth flow.

Ew,i'm really scared,you did a good job,
keep it up
Laura

Wow, this was a great poem. The flow was flawless as well as the rhyming. Nice discriptions too! 5/5

marcella

Wonderful poem. The flow and word choice was excellent. Keep it up 5/5

Wow this is very deep and it's filled with lots of emotion! i love it! the flow was nice! and the rhyming was okay. 5/5

~Kristina

Another really dark poem. I enjoyed this alot it was an amazing write and an even better read. Perfectly penned loved the flow. Good work~mel

Great poem Aly. You're awesme.

Wow this is so good! i love all the discriptions that you put it. 5/5

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