This is amazing. I love it, you could feel the pain..and the treasured love still hidden in your heart. Wow, way to go. 5/5.
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Great job! I loved this one. You kept my attention the whole time and I liked the rhyme scheme. I know exactally what you are going through; I dealt with that when I lost the one I thought I loved... =] Hope everything goes well!

~Ciao

Words cant explain how GREAT this poem is and im not just saying this cause im being nice buit this is great and i can relate

Aww... very sad... but i am glad u r finally gettin over it... very nice poem... keep it up!

AWESOME! This sooooo relates to me and my ex...AWESOME job!!

Thatis so great! i love it! i can feel the emotion and hurt in it! 5/5

xoxo kisses

Great poem....loved the repitition...gives the poem something extra
i dunno why it brought into mind this thing a friend said to me "love is a chapter in a boys life, but its the whole book in a girl's life"
well...not an exact quote...but point made =)