This write is full of passion....Excellent job.

He appears across the room
So handsome and divine
It's a forbidden passion
And he can never be mine

Loved this stanza!
Take care Cindy

I want to caress his every inch
With my soft finger tip
Continuing to explore
As I tease his lower lip

I love this stanza. I know how this feels, wanting someone you can't have. Go for it girl, life's too short to miss opportunities, or Desires in this case! Good luck my dear!

Hey this was really good beautifully worded. xx

Excellent poem
I think i know what contest you entered, and i think you should have a good chance with this one
Well done!!
5/5
*Gem*

This is really very nicely written, could feel ur love for him all the way.

keep writing

all the best and take care

You have created a fire of passion in this poem. Excellent expressions of true passion I must say. This is a great poem indeed. Loved your opening and ending stanzas.

'To rock his world
My heart tells me I must
Seduce him totally
And unleash this animal lust'

I have no doubt that you would lack to do such seduction. Thanks for your sweet words on my poem.

Very sensual and pretty.....nicely done. All the best, Debbie

Wow. A very good poem and a funtastic read. I've felt that way only once in my life. Great job.