This poem is very good. I think it is perfectly written. My fave stanza was

"My suffering doesn't matter
In the scheme of things
As long as you're in control
Of my puppet strings"

I just love it to me that one stanza says so much. You are a very talented writer and I'm adding you to my fave's. 5/5

-Becky

I'm giving this poem a comment coz it's much deserved...I love your comments...and they really make a difference for me...BUT oh my god...You're the poet!!! This poem means so much...to me it's not really the bleeding part that makes it so special...because so many poems whine about bleeding and killing...This poem was so much more. I loved the part where you used the Puppet Strings...I love that phrase...and it's something I can really relate to...^^ keep writing your poems...I like reading them...
Ash

We bleed the most for when we are hurt in the spot we most think we are safe, Very well writen.

I LOVE this.
Oh my...this was beautifully written and perfect in every way.
My favourite stanza was
Oh you're such a bandit
'Cause you stole my heart
Oh you merciless criminal
You tore it apart

I adore that so much, I thought it held so much power.
Beautiful job on this!

I must say, your poem spoke to me, it is so nicely written, so nicely done, you are an amazing poet.

Wow, that was quite sad. It's easily related to, as well. Which I love about it, and most of your poetry. Once again, perfect flow and rhyming, along with word choices.

Keep it up, hun.
<3 Teria.

Some fantastic lines; great poem.