Comments : Drowning In A Teardrop

  • 20 years ago

    by Mary

    I love how you wish her happiness even though shes not with you. Thats very sweet. Your poem is very sweet! Keep up the great writing!

  • 20 years ago

    by Brittany

    I loved that poem, it pretty much describes the relationship I just came out of, it was great, keep it up!

    ~*Brittany*~

  • 20 years ago

    by Kate

    i'm so proud of you. your being the bigger person in this relationship. being there for her is all you can do now. being a friend. i know that has to be tuff to let her go and to see her with someone new but you'll still make it. your family and friends are always gonna be there for you no matter what. we love you. keep it up.

    proud sis

  • 20 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Great job in writing this poem Todd. Very fine piece you got here. Keep up the great work. Wish you all the best in the future. Don't let anyone bring you down.
    Kristina

  • 20 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    Its great. I loved it. I'm gonna go and check out some more of ur poems. Luv rose

  • 20 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    awesome poem! i liked how you didn't use any punctuations. it really has made an effect on the poem. keep on writing. take care:)

  • 20 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    this poem's great, it describes a relationship i got out of not long ago. it's nice that you wish her well!!
    keep writing
    jemma xxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Debs

    hi its a very light and sweet poem. Its a poem that would bring more pleasure for her to know your still around as a friend but for you, you've basically become more stronger.I really liked your poem. Its very intriquing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Hey Todd. Wonderful poem. Very well written and a heartfelt piece. Thank you for sharing your magnificent work. You do a good job in writing your poems and I enjoyed reading them. Keep up the good work and take care.
    Kind regards,
    Kristina

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachele

    your a very good poet and now in my favourites keep the poems cummin and ill vote and comment best wishes always luv rach