This is exactly how i feel sometimes, i love the way you've put across your emotions so clearly.

I liked the title the most. the poem was different. like cry and then next line had die. was more a forced poem. i think. just it was still sad. i liked it a lot still to give it a 5. i don't give much other than 5.

5/5 David

The flow was a bit cluttered, but overall the poem was excellent. Keep the pen on paper! *5/5*

Alyson

I like the saddnet ans trust me i know t is like

Wow, good poem. really good job putting emotion through.

I can also relate alot to this poem it sspeaks truth.you put a brave face on so nobody wil eva know the real you, its like a secret. great work keep writin. xxtake carexx

Hey i know how u feel
thats my life too

This was pretty good kinda like me tho

I can relate t this poem so well right now...no one understands..no one knows what it is like to be in my position...and what really bugs be is that people who have never even really been in love say they understand....FAR FROM IT!
n e way

great job
your a true souled poet!

~love to all the fellow poets of depression~
~shannon~

Wow. I really liked your poem. I can relate to it very well. For a second I thought you might have known me and written that poem about me. ;)

Execellernt

Wow. I really liked your poem. I can relate to it very well. For a second I thought you might have known me and written that poem about me. ;)

Excellernt

But you're not me.
So you'll never know what it's like to be me,

i am suffering these felings.... she has gone frm my life and i shows i mokay.... it reelates to me.. your pom was sad.. tak care.

I can really relate to this poem.
well written
5/5

Very nice 5/5.

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

I CAnt SAY I RELATE TOO YOUR POEM
BUT YOUR EMOTIONS are FLOWING
AND YOU ARE INFLUENCING
ALOT OF POETS
LIKE PAUL WHO DONT KNOW IT
AND WILL NEVER HAVE TALENT
KEEP UP WITH WRITING
AND NEVER STOP FIGHTING