Paul said it perfect. Good job putting this sad story to rhyme. Sad yet beautifullt penned. Nice job!

Cindy this is so sad....as that date draws near just know that we all love you and miss him too.

Days now are spent praying
For a time you'll come for me
Falling into your arms once more
Feeling your love through eternity

Beautiful words....Love, Deb

The years have passed so slowly
Many tears for you I've shed
I see it all over and over
This vision won't leave my head
^^^
Aww Cindy dear this stanza is heart wrenching. Your pen flows with tears and I can feel your deep emotional pain through every stanza, every word.
Many (((hugs))) my dear, new friend. If ever you need a shoulder mine is always available deary

"Helpless not able to reach you
My world crumbled, you hit the floor
Living without you I can't face
I will grieve for you evermore"

I have fell in love with these 4 lines. Your an absolutely brilliant writer Cindy!Thankyou so much for all your comments.

BONNiiE.x

This one bring tears. Feel so sad for the way things hpnd right in front of you....but time moves on so dont stand alone with memories...
loved the complete poem and its really amazing the way u convert even these sad feelings to a beautiful poem...u r so amazing

all the best and take care

This was really sad Cindy. Know my thoughts are with you as usual.

Ooo cindy that is such a touching, its great you can speak out through your poems to your husband, its a fantastic way to get your feelings across, and thankyou for sharing them with us to. xox sam

I don't have the words to ease the pain cos i know that no matter what anyone says, the pain never leaves but i want you to know i'm thinking of you and although anniversaries are always the hardest, remember the happy times and remember you'll see each other again some day, it's a matter of patience.
5/5 as always
*Gem*

Again your words floor me and tear at my heart. It's like you get inside my head and feel what I feel and you put those feelings so very well into words. You have a very special gift.

Aww this is a really moving poem. im sorry for your loss. its excellent how well you can write about it. xx take kare xxxxxxxxxxxx

The poem was so strong, the pain in this poem was evident. i wish i could take it away.

loved this poem. 5/5 David

Amazing poem, rthyml is awesome, I'm sorry about your lose, yet it has done great awonder for your poetry, 5/5 peace.

Wow! It touched my heart. It is beautiful.

I am sure your husband is waiting for you in heaven, and someday you will be reunited with him. Wonderful poem.