I don't really understand this one too much, like what it's about. although the poem flowed nicely.. but i think you should add more so people know what you're talking about. 5/5

~Kristina

Powerful and straight to the point. i love it!!
much love and many kisses,
bex

Beautifully written your poems are really good 5/5
Take care
xoHSxo

Woah intense haha nice write