Very deep poem, Lost it's flow on a couple parts, but over all great meaning, great story, good poem, 5/5,
keep up the good work,

Very nice poem...the flow was ok nicely written!!

Very good flow of emotions, and great take. keep it up! 5/5!

The rhyming pattern was a little off and some verses had more lines than others but a really sweet poem hun

much love and many kisses,
bex