Comments : Hurt

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awww..thts really sad....i like it a lot...5/5 =)

  • 17 years ago

    by tIrEd BoY wItH wIrEd EyEs

    I liked it u should read my "i hate goin home" u might lik it ( by the way in the third line theres a mistake but "Wat she doesn't KNOW can't hurt her."

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a heart touching write. Brought tears to my eyes. Good job on expressing your feelings.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Sasha

    Aww thats so sad

  • 16 years ago

    by WRITING IS MY ESCAPE

    Nice poem!!

    read my poems please
    thankyou!

  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    So i guess i wont go out with him..... but lara im not trying to make you feel guilty but would it have mattered if you didn't care. you know the way chris and me are and soemtimes i feel like people are rrying to get in the way because of jesica and you. and i supported you when you where going out with chris and i liked him. and i meani know i had brayden then but i actualy realy care about him. chris even tried to get me to say that i loved him because he knew it ment something though. lara i realy like him and i wish you could understand that b/c i realy like him alot

  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    I dont wanna get back at you, that was never a thought in my mind. but lara he means alot to me. i've liked chris for a long time and i wish you would support that because i planed to ask him out at gym, but if ti ruins our friendship i dont want it to. lara chris actualy means alot to me, where friends, and maybe sometime more. i dont want to ruoin pour friendship over a guy like what happened between me and makayla, but i wish you knew that i realy cared

  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    I dont wanna get back at you, that was never a thought in my mind. but lara he means alot to me. i've liked chris for a long time and i wish you would support that because i planed to ask him out at gym, but if ti ruins our friendship i dont want it to. lara chris actualy means alot to me, where friends, and maybe sometime more. i dont want to ruoin pour friendship over a guy like what happened between me and makayla, but i wish you knew that i realy cared

  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    And i know that say i care alot bout nother guys and the joe ting that lasted like a day but i KNOW this is diffrent, lara i hope you understand. but i dont want to hurt you or get revenge in anyway, but i mean i do like him alot. i wish thi could be simpler but it isn't and i meani dont care if jesica is mad at me but i do care if you are

  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    OK THEN I WILL fine thank you. i know you've seen this thing before with josh and im not gonna say its gonna be diffrent because i dont know if it will or not. sleep time soon **** im gonna ask him then ur the best!

  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    Lara ur the best now

  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    Lara ur the best now!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    Lara ur a wh0re now i mean i trustedy you and how canu say u says u didn't back stab me!!!!!! u did!!!!!!!! o well i got my fun last night. and i mean some people know about it but i guess you don't. but w.e im least im not a cheater and last least if i werr to cheat it be with a guy who actualy cared.

  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    Awesome ok wer friends so everyone ignore all this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    Awww..thts really sad

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    You are very brave to be able to write about this. So descriptive I was almost there. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by claire

    Thats so sad, but its such a good poem!!! dude its one of the best poems ive read

  • I love this. i am soo sorry if this happened to you. this is one of the strongest poems ive read. i just closed my eyes at the end. i hope everything turned out for the better at the end. good job. 5/5