Haha Jason, I like this poem very much. It goes with out saying, VERY UNIQUE. Definitely reminded me of 'A Knight's Tale.' Excellent write. 5/5

Hey Jas i really loved that one, and even better i kinda of understood it....in a sense, but then again you are recieving this from the queen of dits, lol well i give it a 5/5

Kewls!!! lol thxs for the comments and great poem....now lets go back in time and play joust...ill watch haha jk okies =)

Wow this is really good! i think you did an amazing job on this poem! it flowed really nicely! 5/5

~Kristina

Ya! i like this! it flows perfectly, and you can see the poem, you worded it so well. 5/5
gabriella

I lvoe your intensity in this..its jsut builds....ur a great writer ur in my favs...keep it up

melissa