Great poem was really good, it was easier 2 read this time, 5/5

It's totes awesome! It really flows along. And thanks for your comment on my poem! Hope we can be friends! :)

Wow...I really love your poems, special this its really sweet. Thanks for your comment on my poem 'silver wings' by the way...and I have written a poem simular to it called 'A paradise Kiss' hope you enjoy reading it, if you wanted to read it that is :) xxxx
thanks again and well done
xxx

Thx for the comment on my poem! and This poem is sweet and very well done ! Keep it up!

What a lovely poem!!!
so descriptive and beautiful!
you have now officially made me jelous. (jk!)
well done.
kat-x-

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that poem isss soooooooooooooo cute awwwwwwwwwww comment me back

"So many things,
I wish I could do,
but right at the top,
is to just be with you."

I especially felt that stanza; a feeling very close to my heart. Great poem. Beautifully written :)

Oh and, sorry if I didn't reply to your reply to me in the thread you made in the friendship forum. There's a bar in the middle of it and I can't read it all, haha. But it will be cool to get to know you!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah

Wonderful!! thanks for ur comment on Cuts Everywhere!! that made my day! thanks!! i love this poem!

This reminds me of the way I write poems, which is, of course, excellent ;)

Awwww i absolutely love this poem! it really touched my heart. it was very sweet and sincere. && thanx for your comment.

Hey you...
loved your poem. it was sweet.

mandy

Yuna (Aka Tohru ^_^),
This was a wonderful poem! The words, description, imagery, everything worked so well and had it's own style. The stanza:

So may the waves crash
into the sands of time
and may I love you
will you always be mine?

Was truly incredible, especially the first two lines. The topic was a little common, but that's OK ^_^.
This was a pleasure to read, so keep it up. A full out 5/5! ^.-

With all due respect,
Hatori

Awww i like this its small simple lines in each stanza portray alot of feelings without being to long and dull! well done :)

Really gr8 wrk!!!.. keep it up..

It's poems like this that make me wish it was meant for me. I like how you made your feelings reach the reader, and sound so simple and honest. it's really nice. good stuff.

This is really sweet and cute