This poems is sad and very beautiful. Keep up the great work. *5/5*

Alyson

This was a great poem. i could really get into it. i felt that i was in the room when she cried. the story/ poem was excellent!

5/5 David

Can't let let them know,
git rid of the extra let. hehe.

how this poem reminded me of this book- warriors don't cry--melba patillo beals. she was one of the little rock nine. the book is sad but really good. maybe you should check it out.

This is a good and also sad poem.
It flowed very well..
And the emotion you put into this poem is powerful.
Nice poem. :)
5/5

Aw, very well written! I gave you a 5!:) could u rate my only poem i have on here and comment? thanks!:)